Thursday, October 21, 2010

Broken

Gather in the street,
Children of the night.
Meet at the scene,
Follow the dim light.

The child is broken.
A soul he trades,
To not be alone.
And his memory fades.

Once a child of white,
Now a child of black.
He was never found,
None wanted him back.

2 comments:

  1. This is really good. I'd love to see more to this.

    -Chrisleigh

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  2. I didn't read everything here (only two things), but both seemed pretty deep. They're a little vague, but that isn't a bad thing because it kind of lets everyone relate to it.

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